Thursday, 16 June 2016

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Lina’s heart was racing as she saw a few soldiers following her so she jumps into the river and finds out that the water is super cold. It was 1733 since the tribe laid off to their site. It was linda's turn to fight she really hated mina from the other tribe. Sometimes when each tribe walk past each other Lina and mina would stare at each other. Lina would give mina a ferocious look making you want to go and stay in your room forever. When lina gives her that look she tells her dad the head of their tribe that lina keeps giving her that ferocious look. Later on that day her dad went and visited the other tribe which is called the Mighty Tribe. He went to their camping site and spoke to lina’s father and said that lina always scares her with her ferocious face.
Lina’s dad told mina’s dad that lina would do nothing like that. So lina’s dad had a talk with her. Lina got so angry and went for a little walk. When lina’s angry she would always have a little walk to the beach to calm her head. She would look at the calm blue water and she then look at the blue skies. So she went back to her village palm trees could be seen from the village and people loved that point of view. Lina really loved her village and everyone in it. She had long black hair, brown eyes and always wore her feather cloak. She was the chief’s daughter.
One day as Lina walked down to the beach she was stopped by Mina. “What do you want?” “Nothing!” replied Mina with an angry tone to her voice. “Just because you are the chief’s daughter, it doesn’t mean we have to be kind to you! Said mina. Mina said that in her tribe people always say that they do not want to be kind to her they want to be bad to her. There chief overheard what they were saying but their chief said that they can not be mean. But they didn’t listen to there chief.
Lina’s heart raced as she saw warriors from another tribe approach her. Mina planned to let the other tribe kidnap Lina! Lina ran as fast as she could trying to defend herself but they caught her. So they put a bag over her head and she couldn’t breath so she fainted. A few minutes later she then woke up and she tried to look around but it was Pitch black. She could hardly see anything. They finally took the bag of her head. She had time to breath, so mina and a few of her tribe friends were asking her why her that is putting her in charge? Lina said “No your dad did not put me in charge! Said lina. Mina then got super angry. She walked by herself to her village. She reached her destination so she went to her dad and yelled at him and she didn’t talk to him for almost a week.
When lina was in the cell she heard someone walking in so she quickly puts herself back to normal. The person who came in was mina. She came in to cut the ropes on lina’s hand. Mina was so sad and she apologized to lina and mina told lina that it was a big mistake. Lina was so happy to be released so she ran home jumping up and down. So she stood outside of the village and her dad ran up to her and hugged her. Lina’s dad said that he really missed her.

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