Assembly Time!
Feeling the cold breeze
As it feels like 100 degrees
Playing with my friends
As we walk to class
Looking around I see the bright green grass
Walking to the hall
As we stand up nice and tall
Singing the national anthem
As I see kids throwing a tantrum
We continue singing
When I hear the bell ringing
Hey ana i really get what you mean because you see that every Friday for your writing is so good it has nice vocabulary keep up all of your spectacular ideas
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Ana, I really liked how you explained about how you feel about assembly time. I can relate to you about how you said, “Feeling the cold breeze, as it feel’s 100 degrees”. Keep up the good work Ana, keep writing about your creative poem! Malo Aupito.
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Ana, I really like your poem, my favourite part was the kids throwing a tantrum. I can relate to you talking about “walking through the breeze feeling like 100 degrees (cold)”. Keep up the good work, your writing is spectacular.
ReplyDeleteJumbo Ana!
ReplyDeleteReally love your Poem! Sounds like this is what you really feel about coming to Assembly, I can really relate on what you have said, like coming to class on a really cold day and feeling the cold breeze. I Really enjoyed reading this Poem Ana, Malo Lava, way to go!
From Petesa :)
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ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Ana,
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post and it's really interesting to read and I like reading it. Keep it up and I love it
Faka lofa lahi atu and greetings to you WOW! Ana what an interesting poem I really liked your interesting words,My favourite part of the poem was when we are singing the national anthem you see kids throw a tantrum I would like to see some more poems going
ReplyDeleteSincerely Monika
Malo e lelei Ana
ReplyDeleteI've just finished reading your amazing poem. And i just want to say what i love,about your amazing poem is how we always have assembly every Friday. And yes we all love the green grass and we love to sing and i just want to say i hope you do another poem next time and keep up the good work.
Kia orana Ana, I love your incredible poem, I liked how you explained what you feel like when you go to assembly in the morning, and I like the part you say " Feeling the cold breeze,As it feel like 100 degrees. That's what I feel like when I get out of the shower in the morning.Keep up the good work Ana.:)
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